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Snowy night

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Snowy night



- Language: English
- Warning: blood and death are mentioned, failed English, Nyotalia
- Pairing: EstFin-ish, EstFemRus, FinFemSwe
- Characters are called by human names [Eduard, Tino, Anya, Evelina] (like a people from different countries they represents) [Evelina is given by me]


   I am sitting in my silence room. Semi darkness around me, but I don't do anything against it. Only my Laptop makes light for me, it is enough to me. I am pushing the buttons, the laptop understands my orders, and it is not against it. I am happy. The last memories about it come back to my mind. But it is over. Everything ended well.
   Right now, only my work I can concentrate, to finish it till night. Suddenly I hear noises from the corridor. I was alone till now. Who is it?
   I didn't have time to ask it, or stand up to open the door to see who it is. It was Tino. He enters my room with big smile on his face.
   - Eduard! – He said to me – did you see? The winter is finally here! It started snowing!
   I knew, in Finland the winter comes before here, because it is on north. He can see snow many times. But I think it is more for him.
   - Really? I didn't even notice that…
   I stop myself, because I get scared, when Tino close my laptop down so suddenly. I see. I understand he wanted. He wanted me to go with him for a walk. Of course I go with him. If I am with him, I am not stressed, and I feel more free and calm.
   I run to find my jacket that I left in the kitchen.
   - We can go – I say, he just nods at me with smile and opens the door.
   I go out from my house, and look up the sky. It looks good. Beautiful. The sky's color is like a rainbow with orange, pink and purple colors. The snow is falling, the snowflakes are so big.
   Tino started talking as always. This time about his work, what he did last Christmas. I heard this story, but some parts of it were new.
   One thing is in my mind while he is talking. Why does he love the snow that much? I know. He was born in the snow. December 6 is very important him. It is the independence day of Finland. He is Finn after all. The Christmas is a Christian Holiday. He has a lot of work because of that.
   I got courage to ask.
   - Why do you love the snow?
   He stops talking. He stops walking. I look back at him. What did I say? I thought he loves Snow. And it means something special to him.
   - Covers… - he said with fair in his voice.
   - Covers?
   - It covers… the blood on the ground, the dead bodies. I am independent. I don't belong to anyone. Not anymore.
   - Tino…
   - You know. Many years ago it was snowing on that day I got independence. I was finally free. It always covered the blood and dead bodies for Christmas. I could able to forget every bad that happened with me. I was always happy.
   He has sad smile on his face. It is so sad to see my Tino like that. I always tried to help him, he made me happy. He was always so happy. I am his best friend, but it seems I don't know him well either. I lift my hands and place them on his face. He looks surprised. I start smiling, and make his smile like he always do. He starts laughing. I do as well.
   Suddenly we stop laughing at same time. Small giggling we hear. We look forward on the road we are walking. Two girls was standing them. One of them was wearing pink long jacket with fluffy hat. She is giggling at us. The other girl was wearing Blue coat, she has a little smile on her face.
   - Anya..? – I ask it, and turned to red.
   The girl, I love, was giggling at me like that. It is so embarrassing. I look at her with red face. She is only smiling. I saw, Evelina is walking toward to Tino. I follow her with eyes. She does same I did with Tino. She holds his cheek gently. Tino is blushing like me. Evelina catch his arm, and walks away with him.
   Tino looks at me back.
   - Here is your time – he twinkles at me.
   I couldn't have time to do anything. Anya appeared next to me while I was looking at Tino.
   - Will you take me home? It is so dark to walk alone – she say with her innocent smile.
   - Y-yes, of course!
   "Calm down, calm down" I say that to myself. Tino, you think it is so easy? I'm sure you will do same in this snowy night…
My entry to the fanfiction contest in :iconfinland-fc:

FAILED TRANSLATION, SORRY!! but I hope you can enjoy it ;A;

Original fanfiction was called "sunflower in the snow".. and this was the opening of it.. that was written in hungarian... unfinished one.. I translated the first part of that to english as an entry..

I fail at writting in english or hungarian... but sometimes my idea are hard to be drawn
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It covers… the blood on the ground, the dead bodies. I am independent. I don't belong to anyone. Not anymore.

I love this part ;O;